These example pages help parents and tutors show what stronger writing looks like. Use them to compare openings, endings, descriptive paragraphs, and before/after upgrades.
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See 11+ creative writing examples with parent notes, paragraph upgrades, and a simple way to compare a weaker draft with a stronger one at home.
Read examples guideUpdated 19 March 2026
Use 10 action scene examples, a before-and-after rewrite, and a 12-minute home drill to help Year 5 and 11+ writers keep action clear.
Read examples guidePublished 14 March 2026
Compare a full before-and-after story, see what changed, and use a simple home editing task to improve one draft this week.
Read examples guidePublished 14 March 2026
Use Year 5-friendly figurative language examples, a worked rewrite, and a quick practice task to improve description without forcing it.
Read examples guidePublished 14 March 2026
Use 10 inner-thought examples, a worked rewrite, and a simple home task to help Year 5 and 11+ writing feel more natural and alive.
Read examples guidePublished 14 March 2026
Use annotated 11+ creative writing examples with practical parent feedback, one worked rewrite, and a realistic 15-minute home practice task.
Read examples guidePublished 5 March 2026
Use practical continuation writing task examples for Year 5, with model next lines, a worked improvement, and a 12-minute home practice task.
Read examples guidePublished 5 March 2026
Use independent-school 11+ writing examples and a practical weekly plan to build stronger structure, style control, and confidence at home.
Read examples guidePublished 5 March 2026
Practical Kent 11+ writing task examples and title ideas, with a worked sample response and a parent-friendly home practice task.
Read examples guidePublished 5 March 2026
Learn a practical triplet format for Sutton Stage 2 writing with worked examples, parent marking notes, and a three-night home drill.
Read examples guidePublished 5 March 2026
Use 10 character introduction examples, one worked rewrite, and a realistic home task to improve Year 5 and 11+ story openings.
Read examples guidePublished 2 March 2026
Sentence variety examples from basic to advanced, with a three-pass worked paragraph and a 12-minute drill for home practice.
Read examples guidePublished 1 March 2026
Use 20 show-not-tell swaps with before-and-after examples, a worked paragraph rewrite, and a realistic 15-minute home practice task.
Read examples guidePublished 1 March 2026
Ten strong ending examples for Year 5 and 11+, plus a worked rewrite and a timed ending-rescue drill parents can run at home.
Read examples guidePublished 1 March 2026
An annotated excitement paragraph example for Year 5 and 11+ with a before-after upgrade, pace tips, and a parent-friendly practice task.
Read examples guidePublished 25 February 2026
An annotated suspense paragraph example for Year 5 and 11+ with a suspense-building checklist, common fixes, and a short timed practice drill.
Read examples guidePublished 25 February 2026
Parent-friendly dialogue examples with punctuation for Year 5 and 11+, plus common fixes, an annotated mini-scene, and a short practice task.
Read examples guidePublished 25 February 2026
An annotated fear paragraph example for 11+ creative writing with a before-and-after upgrade, vocabulary support, and a parent-friendly practice task.
Read examples guidePublished 24 February 2026
Use practical 11+ descriptive writing examples and a parent checklist to help your child add vivid detail without forcing advanced vocabulary.
Read examples guideUpdated 22 February 2026
Help your child write stronger 11+ story openings and endings with clear parent methods, example rewrites, and a weekly routine that improves structure.
Read examples guideUpdated 22 February 2026
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