Score progress
Overall writing score
Developing (Approaching Standard)
Score
6.3 / 10
11+ creative writing feedback for parents
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Writing snapshot
A quick snapshot of the building blocks in this piece of writing.
154
Words
15
Adjectives
8
Sensory details
What a feedback report includes
See the core scoring and readiness flow every family starts with, plus the Pro-only report blocks for deeper comparison, audio, rewrites, and corrections.
Score breakdown
Score breakdown
In the app, category scores open detailed feedback.
7.2
/10
Ideas
5.5
/10
Vocabulary and spelling
6.6
/10
Grammar and tenses
7.0
/10
Structure
5.4
/10
Punctuation
Grammar School Readiness
Developing (Approaching Standard)
Readiness
6.1 / 10
Why
What is going well: This is a genuinely gripping, spooky story with memorable details (the hissing torches, the too-clean bell, the cages) and a clear, page-turning build from “Harry's missing” to “we must escape now.”
What to improve next: Add one small pay-off for an early clue, especially the strange wooden stick, and patch one or two logic or clarity moments, like why the guards are down and giving Ms Harris one sharper on-page threat moment, so the ending feels even more satisfying and watertight.
Next step
Rewrite one paragraph to include a near-caught moment with sound, footsteps, or a voice, and add one line that explains the guards, for example drugged tea or Mr Browne knocked them out, while linking back to the wooden stick with a small hint.
Message for Oliver
You've created brilliant tension and a creepy atmosphere right from the start, and the escape down into the tunnel is exciting. Next time, pick one clue, like the wooden stick, and bring it back later with a tiny hint that it matters. Add a quick near-caught moment with footsteps, the bell, or a voice right before they find Harry.
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Peer comparison
Rank 7 of 50Better than 85% of similar 11+ writing submissions in the matched set.
Compared with
Children targeting 2027Same broad exam-year cohort for fairer context.
Position
7th in the sample setA clearer view than a score alone.
Difficulty context
Like-for-like task comparisonThe benchmark accounts for prompt type, expected standard, and task challenge instead of comparing every piece as if it were identical.
Guided rewrites
Corrected writing versions
Free includes a simple corrected draft. Pro unlocks stronger and top-score rewrite levels based on the same coach feedback.
All versions are tuned to what a typical 10-year-old can realistically write.
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Small fixes that keep most of your original writing.
New details
Rephrased
On the Moon
Stepping down from the landed spacecraft, I stared at the endless grey ground below me and carefully set my boot onto the rocky terrain. Slowly, I moved from one foot to the other (I felt a bit floaty because the gravity was low).
As I explored, I paused and saw Earth glimmering in the distance like a bright gem in the darkness. For a moment, I was completely calm, watching it hang in the inky black sky, until a voice snapped me out of it. "Hey, we need you back at the spacecraft!" it called, so I turned around and hurried back.
On the way, I looked behind me and noticed my tentative footprints (the Moon dust held their shape) pressed into the surface. Nearby, craters and potholes dotted the ground; some craters were so massive they could fit lots of people inside. Finally, I reached the spacecraft, rechecked my helmet, and got ready to return home.
Coach chat
Follow-up questionsCoach chat
Ask follow-up questions about this writing.
You
Can you help me turn this into a stronger 11+ opening without changing the whole story?
Coach
Yes. Keep the moon landing idea, but make the first line feel immediate and specific. Start with your reaction, then zoom in on one clear image. For example, "My breath caught as my boot pressed into the Moon's silent grey dust." That gives the examiner a stronger hook straight away.
Action tip
Rewrite only the first two sentences: add one feeling, one powerful verb, and one precise detail.
Ask for follow-up changes
Try: "Give me a better ending and one stronger descriptive sentence."
Skill growth
Progress
Track how your child's scores change over time across core writing skills.
Overall
Ideas
Word choice
Grammar
Structure
Punctuation
Did you know?
Writing snapshot
A quick snapshot of the building blocks in this piece of writing.
207
Words
14
Sentences
17
Adjectives
9
Adverbs
12
Sensory details
12
Literary devices
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Stories, descriptions, diary entries, and exam-style tasks
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Overall score, breakdown, and Grammar School Readiness
Simple guided rewrite included in every free report
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A weekly writing loop busy families can stick with
Keep each session short, specific, and easier to repeat week after week.
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Use the feedback
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Track and repeat
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How it works
The real app flow, step by step
Set up one child, upload a piece, confirm anything that needs review, then open the feedback report.
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Create a child profile Add a name, age, and target exam year so each child has a separate dashboard and progress view.
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Upload writing your way Start with photos of your child's handwriting or a PDF. If you need to, paste typed text instead.
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Review uploads when needed Open previews, check extracted text, and confirm the task type before feedback is created.
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Use the report and follow-up tools See the score breakdown, simple rewrite, coach chat, shareable reports, progress, and Pro-only peer benchmark, audio, advanced rewrites, and sentence corrections.
Pricing
Simple pricing for steady weekly writing practice
Start with 2 free reports. Move to Pro when you want the locked report sections: peer benchmarks, coach audio, advanced rewrites, sentence corrections, and 20 reports each month.
Free start
2 reports to start
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Free
See the core report style before you pay for ongoing practice.
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Two core reports to test the workflow.
Included
- 2 core feedback reports included
- Overall score, category breakdown, and readiness summary
- Strengths, priorities, next step, and simple guided rewrite
- Coach chat, share links, and report history
- Handwriting photos, PDFs, or typed uploads
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- 20 reports each month across the household
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- Sentence-by-sentence corrections and improvement reasons
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Choose ProEverything you need for consistent writing practice
Built around the real weekly flow families use: upload writing, use the core report, and unlock deeper Pro guidance when you need it.
Handwriting, PDFs, or typed text
Upload your child's handwriting photos, PDFs, or pasted text in one place. If anything looks off, review the extracted text before feedback is created.
See upload flowScores plus readiness in one report
See the overall score, category breakdown, and Grammar School Readiness summary so it is clear what the latest piece means.
See report sectionsGuided rewrites and next steps
Every report highlights strengths, priorities, one clear next step, and a simple rewrite. Pro adds stronger rewrite levels and sentence-by-sentence correction reasons.
View rewrite examplesCoach chat, plus Pro audio
Ask follow-up questions about the same submission. Pro adds child-friendly audio feedback when you want the guidance read aloud.
Open coach chatProgress and Pro peer context
Track scores and writing skills over time. Pro also shows percentile, cohort, and difficulty-adjusted comparison for each report.
See progress dashboardShare links and PDF reports
Create secure share links or downloadable PDFs so tutors and family can work from the same report and next-step goals.
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Compare schools on Grammar School Hub, then bring the writing part back here for feedback, simple rewrites, and weekly next steps.
Use each site for the job it does best.
- Compare the schools Profiles, exam areas, admissions context, and rankings.
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Questions parents ask most
Quick answers on using the platform week to week.
What kind of creative writing can we submit?
You can submit stories, descriptions, diary-style responses, and exam-style tasks as handwriting photos, PDFs, or typed writing.
How is feedback shown to parents and children?
Free reports show scores, strengths, priorities, readiness, one clear next step, and a simple rewrite. Pro adds peer benchmarks, coach audio, advanced rewrite levels, and sentence-by-sentence corrections.
What does Pro unlock?
Pro unlocks 20 reports each month, peer benchmarks, coach audio, stronger and top-score rewrites, and sentence-by-sentence corrections for deeper writing practice.
How do we keep writing practice consistent each week?
Families can revisit each report, use the next step, ask follow-up questions in coach chat, and track score trends for each child over time.
Can tutors or family review the writing too?
Yes. Share secure links or downloadable PDF reports so tutors and family can work from the same feedback and next steps.
Parent guides for better creative writing practice
Use these practical reads to support this week's writing session and keep improvement consistent.
School routes
Schools that require creative writing (11+)
Start with the writing-required cluster and verify school-level details using official admissions sources.
See writing-required schoolsSchool routes
Schools without a creative writing section (11+)
Use the non-writing cluster to re-balance revision time while keeping writing maintenance in your weekly plan.
See non-writing routesTrust and safety
AI safety and safeguarding for parent-led use
Understand how to use feedback tools safely and responsibly with clear child-safety boundaries.
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11+ creative writing examples explained for parents
See before-and-after examples and understand exactly how stronger writing earns better marks.
Read articleStory structure
Story openings and endings that improve 11+ responses
Learn easy coaching prompts that help children start and finish stories with more confidence.
Read articleWeekly routine
Build a writing routine without daily battles
Follow a realistic weekly structure for families who want steady writing progress without burnout.
Read articleNot sure yet? Try one real piece for free
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